17A- Elevator Pitch No. 2

17A- Elevator Pitch No. 2 


Reflection: 
I thought my first elevator pitch went well.  Unfortunately, I only had one comment under my video.  Yet, I was lucky enough that the one comment left included great constructive criticism.  The commentator complimented me on mentioning a personal experience, my passionate tone, and my addition of puns to make the pitch more engaging.  In regards to my weaknesses, she mentioned some things that I definitely noticed myself after rewatching my video.  The commentator suggested I give a pause after asking questions, to emphasize my point more, and to add a little more movement in my pitch. 

What did you change, based on the feedback? 
Based on the feedback I received, I definitely slowed down a bit and paused after asking reflective questions.  I also tried to use my hands a bit more, as well as keep up the passionate tone I was applauded for.  

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